Project A: Book/Magazine Re-Design: Draft 1 -inside pages [Sara Z]

Original pages here

draft 2:

~ by saraz on February 21, 2008.

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10 Responses to “Project A: Book/Magazine Re-Design: Draft 1 -inside pages [Sara Z]”

  1. i like the simplicity of the design you chose ^^ keep it up

    shaikhamohamed said this on February 21, 2008 at 2:17 pm | Reply

  2. big difference what about adding more colorzz in the first pagee?

    hamdazu said this on February 22, 2008 at 6:00 pm | Reply

  3. i really like the typography, nice neat work

    shaikhaalhattawi said this on February 23, 2008 at 5:03 am | Reply

  4. very neat and simple.. liked the typography and its organization..

    alanood said this on February 23, 2008 at 1:37 pm | Reply

  5. 1. Respect the white perforated line and adjust the text direction accordingly.
    2. Just one red monster image, which could be bigger to balance the composition instead of 2 images.
    yun*

    cyunsun said this on February 24, 2008 at 8:24 am | Reply

  6. Thank you everyone and thanks Ms Yunsun

    saraz said this on February 24, 2008 at 10:53 am | Reply

  7. the 2nd draft is more sophisticated.. I like it..
    the only thing is that i feel you need more white space between the columns, and I don’t like the widow word left by itself at the top of 2nd column..

    Good luck

    lailaali said this on February 25, 2008 at 5:26 am | Reply

  8. Laila thank you 😀 😀 !

    saraz said this on February 25, 2008 at 8:30 am | Reply

  9. Nice work keep it up weldone

    babarazeem said this on March 3, 2008 at 5:44 am | Reply

  10. Babar!! Thank you 😀

    saraz said this on March 6, 2008 at 11:16 am | Reply

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