Project A: Book/Magazine Re-Design: Draft 1 -inside pages [Sara Z]

Original pages here

draft 2:

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~ by saraz on February 21, 2008.

10 Responses to “Project A: Book/Magazine Re-Design: Draft 1 -inside pages [Sara Z]”

  1. i like the simplicity of the design you chose ^^ keep it up

  2. big difference what about adding more colorzz in the first pagee?

  3. i really like the typography, nice neat work

  4. very neat and simple.. liked the typography and its organization..

  5. 1. Respect the white perforated line and adjust the text direction accordingly.
    2. Just one red monster image, which could be bigger to balance the composition instead of 2 images.
    yun*

  6. Thank you everyone and thanks Ms Yunsun

  7. the 2nd draft is more sophisticated.. I like it..
    the only thing is that i feel you need more white space between the columns, and I don’t like the widow word left by itself at the top of 2nd column..

    Good luck

  8. Laila thank you 😀 😀 !

  9. Nice work keep it up weldone

  10. Babar!! Thank you 😀

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