Project A: Book/Magazine Re-Design: Draft 2-Book Cover (Alia S.)

Hi every body,,

third draft…

this is my Second…

this is my first ..

the new layout..

origenal magazine layout..

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~ by aliasaif on February 18, 2008.

4 Responses to “Project A: Book/Magazine Re-Design: Draft 2-Book Cover (Alia S.)”

  1. Since your art direction wasn’t clear yet, I don’t know where you’re going with your idea… If you think of DVD covers or any movie posters, you might be able to find your own way to tell the story. yun*

  2. Well, i think you did not read my production plan..
    i mentioned that this book is a novel and the photo is from the movie of this novel..

  3. i think the picture should blend more with background and the kid silhouette is distracting

    good luck

  4. 1. Great improvement on the revision.
    2. Title area, the lower bottom background could be much darker to support the title and create the contrast of the page.
    3. The bag and book should be differentiated from the image: Colored or outlined with different stroke.
    4. Reposition the title aligned to the right instead of the center. Use the richer colors of the red in the image.
    5. Logo and bar code should be on the back not on the side.
    6. Choose the different font for the author.
    7. The text on the back can come out of the box aligning with the suggested lines in the image.
    8. Edit the main characters. Need to be sharpened.

    yun*

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